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And this is why Dinian considers Jurassic Park one of the scariest horror movies ever.
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DelSoul February 11th, 2012, 6:05 pm

I'm loving your artwork, storyline and comic style. You sir earred a Fav. Just wish i could be in that story. look so epic and great background story on the last comic.

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Jops February 13th, 2012, 4:25 am

@DelSoul:
Thanks for the nice words. Glad you're enjoying the comic. ^^

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A conundrum of sorts.

Derp (Guest) February 14th, 2012, 5:10 pm

Love the comic, so with respect I suggest you proofread this page. Try "last night" and "renowned". The statistics line bothers me but I don't know why. Ratios usually aren't expressed in percentages, and just what exactly is that thing expressing? And more importantly, why is the guy staring at his own nose? When is the next page, and will it answer the questions this page left me with?

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Jops February 15th, 2012, 4:33 am

@Derp:

Oh, thanks for the feedback, that's actually very welcome. Anyway, lemme address some of your concerns.

1) I'll actually leave it as "tonite". It may be incorrect, but that's basically how Dinian talks: she tends to refer to the past night as today's when it's still morning. Also, the misspelled "nite" is intentional. While D speaks correctly most of the time, she still has some speech quirks.

2) "Renowned" shall be fixed as soon as i get back home from work. That's a mistake, thanks for warning me. [FIXED]

3) I may change the statistics line into "...has been statistically verified". [FIXED]

4) Ratio isn't normally expressed in percentage, but it's still acceptable to do so and i went for it because didn't want to come up with more detailed numbers. After all, the real point of that slide is to clarify that "Marilu" is actually Dinian: she's never been called by surname before and i wanted to avoid confusion on that.

5) The guy looks at his nose because this style is still in development (used to draw differently), and i still have to find the right way for some things. Drawing late at night doesn't help in keeping attention to details. Well, I won't go back editing it but, now that you pointed it out, i'll definitely be more careful when i draw someone's eyes in the future. ^^

6) Not sure what your questions are, but Reality Check will take just the next page and a couple panels from the following one. Then one short scene with the E.T.G. guys and, after that, we're back at the police station to see how Mika is doing. I won't say more, it'd be spoilerish.

I update weekly, check back on Sunday night or Monday morning, depending on your timezone. Unfortunately real life doesn't allow me to update more often.

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DHJones (Guest) May 31st, 2012, 3:53 am

you use the raptor pic from memecenter didn't you XD

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Jops May 31st, 2012, 7:48 am

@DHJones:
I drew the Philosophical Raptor, yeah! I liked the humor of having "vicious beast" going with an image normally associated to clever irony.