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Chapter 4 - 12

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"and stuff" being "eating a chocolate snack in an intimidating fashion".
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Vertous February 3rd, 2013, 8:17 pm

I would say "ok anything you say!"

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The_Hankerchief February 3rd, 2013, 8:36 pm

Couple typos on the page, just you you know, dude.

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Jops February 3rd, 2013, 10:14 pm

@The_Hankerchief:
Where? Where? I'm feeling horribly stupid now, 'cause i really don't see them.

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Lockman February 4th, 2013, 4:38 pm

@Jops: "troath" in panel 4.

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Jops February 5th, 2013, 4:17 am

@Lockman:
Fixed now. Thanks!

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The_Hankerchief February 17th, 2013, 3:10 am

Mad also has an extra "e" at the end in the last panel with Mika.

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Jops February 17th, 2013, 4:17 am

@The_Hankerchief:

Actually, that one is correct. It's supposed to be "made".
The sentence picks up from the previous one and should read as: "if (those threats are) made at you for the sake of my well being...".

May still be a screw-up tho. Not only English isn't my first language but, i realize my use of it often enough has a lot of pollution from other languages i know (sentence constructions, idiomatic expressions...). I also have English occasionally invading the other languages, so they score even here.

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The_Hankerchief February 20th, 2013, 8:21 pm

Oh, I see. Now I feel silly for calling that out. My apologies!

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Jops February 21st, 2013, 2:14 pm

@The_Hankerchief:
That's alright, don't worry.
As i said, my English is not foolproof. I honestly appreciate you guys warning me of such mistakes when you see them. ^^